tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post4852887168446830974..comments2023-06-06T07:38:35.538-06:00Comments on Answering the What If: I'm cheatingAngie Paxtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16858564760009040975noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-87491438866482074692010-05-16T17:11:06.770-06:002010-05-16T17:11:06.770-06:00I'm so glad you cheated and decided to join on...I'm so glad you cheated and decided to join on the fun!!! It was certainly well worth it! Wow this was amazing, I felt her pain and her power at the same time. That took a lot of courage to get the hell out of there, what strength. Inspiration for us all!!<br /><br />Wonderul Angie, absolutely wonderful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-41840195894875553102010-05-16T01:47:51.206-06:002010-05-16T01:47:51.206-06:00Run Ruth run!!!!!
This is excellent - I was drawn...Run Ruth run!!!!!<br /><br />This is excellent - I was drawn immediately to the character's inner conflict and willed and willed her to pick up an run! You really brought out her confusion, her determination and finally her strength!<br /><br />Well done you!<br /><br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-44420006826998396542010-05-13T23:14:15.728-06:002010-05-13T23:14:15.728-06:00I was so relieved when she ran! That's a reall...I was so relieved when she ran! That's a really satisfying ending to this scene--and her struggle. Nicely done!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-62303831171130324512010-05-13T08:05:16.045-06:002010-05-13T08:05:16.045-06:00Thanks, all of you for taking the time to read! A...Thanks, all of you for taking the time to read! And thank you for all the positive feedback. I appreciate it so much!Angie Paxtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858564760009040975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-3478227866203850762010-05-13T07:34:43.592-06:002010-05-13T07:34:43.592-06:00Good for her! Like someone else said this was very...Good for her! Like someone else said this was very intense - in such a subtle way. Great job.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-438273567053583232010-05-13T05:44:05.171-06:002010-05-13T05:44:05.171-06:00Run, Ruth, Run! Wow. Way to set up conflict. All t...Run, Ruth, Run! Wow. Way to set up conflict. All those people waiting. A life of horror flashing before her eyes. Yipes. Thanks for posting:)Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-76283229952128447852010-05-13T01:35:21.279-06:002010-05-13T01:35:21.279-06:00Whoo hoo! I'm so glad she ran. I was hoping an...Whoo hoo! I'm so glad she ran. I was hoping and hoping the whole time. You've done a brilliant job here. You drew me in from the first sentence. And I love how you speckled the abuse in tiny bit through the action. It works beautifully. Nice job. And thanks for participating! :)Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-60522938073751967662010-05-12T17:47:18.772-06:002010-05-12T17:47:18.772-06:00Loved this! I'm also glad she ran at the end. ...Loved this! I'm also glad she ran at the end. The inner conflict really came through - with herself and with the mother. Great job :)Jaydee Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01069805915071090479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-3739561747100529012010-05-12T17:43:24.315-06:002010-05-12T17:43:24.315-06:00Great conflict, great entry. Vivid and intesnse. :...Great conflict, great entry. Vivid and intesnse. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-27564671060630813672010-05-12T15:50:54.612-06:002010-05-12T15:50:54.612-06:00I'm just so happy she ran, I'm not quite s...I'm just so happy she ran, I'm not quite sure what to say other than: excellent conflict! Life is all about choices. For Ruth the price was too high even though it meant sacrificing something she'd always dreamt of. Brilliant job, Angie!VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-30598932218842522212010-05-12T14:41:18.422-06:002010-05-12T14:41:18.422-06:00Awesome! Glad I stumbled on this Blogfest thing - ...Awesome! Glad I stumbled on this Blogfest thing - I've *met* some great writers. Look forward to reading more of your work along the way :-)Dawn Iushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546425873531022196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-44154259022546931062010-05-12T13:50:57.958-06:002010-05-12T13:50:57.958-06:00Damn girl, I am blown away...I love the paragraph ...Damn girl, I am blown away...I love the paragraph with the surgery metaphors. Brilliant.LMBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11979838225639567039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-41177579829946888272010-05-12T12:28:43.809-06:002010-05-12T12:28:43.809-06:00Great excerpt. I really felt the sense of urgency ...Great excerpt. I really felt the sense of urgency and wariness in the situation and I was really relieved when she ran away! Good stuff!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-43335217241389925292010-05-12T12:11:18.330-06:002010-05-12T12:11:18.330-06:00I'm pooped. Been checking out the entries for ...I'm pooped. Been checking out the entries for more than 5 hours. Will come back and read tomorrow, Angie, I promise. :)Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107245040090735659.post-42592052786253197642010-05-12T11:57:55.420-06:002010-05-12T11:57:55.420-06:00WOW. I love the subtle intensity. Good stuff, Angi...WOW. I love the subtle intensity. Good stuff, Angie!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.com